For starters, let's put a comma between 'Lordy Lordy,' as it is repeated multiple times. Now that we've got that straightened out, let's look at the second line, where a flagrant error is. 'Look whose 40' should read 'Look who's 40.' 'Whose' is possessive, but there is nothing to possess here.
Submitted by an 8th grader
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